Post #5
Creation Story of the Stars and Light: Characters
When I took the sun and released the stars and moon into the world, there were not many involved; only a father, his daughter, and the child she bore that I took over. Both the father and the daughter had dark hair and a darker complexion, and the daughter had great beauty. I would even go as far to say she was the most beautiful of all. The child I reclaimed had raven black hair and eyes, still staying true to my true form. The father was kind hearted, as he wished to always keep me appeased, but he also was worrisome and almost vain. He worried that his daughter was ugly, and therefore kept the gift of light to himself for he was afraid to lay his eyes upon his beautiful daughter. The daughter herself was kind and lighthearted, but I never fully got to know her.
You did very well describing the characters. I was able to get a visual image of what they looked like though your description. It was very well worded.
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